Only if eyes could talk, his grilling stare would have screamed the loudest.

She moved silently towards the area pointed with so much annoyance.

Her heart skipped a beat remembering last night.

It was just one last time she devoured & ventured out!

Hours & hours of grit looks gloomy now;

Is it all gone for good, by a whiff of ONE night?

She somehow reached the zone, eyes tight shut!

One step at a time.

Looking at him; her insides churn! OH GOD save me this time….

With BATED BREATH & fingers crossed – she climbed the weighing scale,

Trainer’s eyes gawking for the digits to shine.

Digits moved up; but saved her in nick of time…

‘Gulp some water & do 50 sit-ups! No more tarts & sweet pies.’

Next shoot is with ‘healthy living’; you must look bright!

© Dipika Singh

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18 Comments

Aesha Shah · October 13, 2017 at 3:51 pm

That was good! Didn’t expect a bit the poetry to take this twist at the end. Superb!

    gleefulblogger · October 13, 2017 at 3:52 pm

    Thanks a lot Aesha.. i was not sure if this will click good. Much appreciate:)

Anita Singh · October 13, 2017 at 8:12 pm

Nicely written , each word has his own beauty 👍👍

    gleefulblogger · October 14, 2017 at 3:18 am

    Thank you Ma’am

Rakhi Parsai · October 14, 2017 at 7:31 am

Wow, what a lovely poem. I wasn’t expecting that end. In fact, hundreds of things crossed my mind after reading first 4 lines. Alas, the end was just awesome.

    gleefulblogger · October 15, 2017 at 3:31 am

    haha. glad you like it. thanks for reading

Shilpa Garg · October 14, 2017 at 11:04 am

Ah! This is the story of my life. There’s so much of trepidation before standing on the weighing scales. Loved the twist!

    gleefulblogger · October 15, 2017 at 3:29 am

    Thank you Shilpa for reading, we are sailing in the same boat. Weighing scales are my worst fears.

JayanthyGovindarajan (@JayanthyG) · October 14, 2017 at 11:37 am

Nice twist!! I am on the scale where people push me to gain weight! 🙂

    gleefulblogger · October 15, 2017 at 3:28 am

    🙂 Thank you for reading

Rohan Kachalia · October 15, 2017 at 7:18 am

For me its the opposite. I look at the weighing scale expecting it to be on a higher side, but alas! Liked the post, Dipika.

    gleefulblogger · October 15, 2017 at 10:11 am

    Hahah.. lucky you I would say then. Me & scale has a love hate relationship. Love for fewer times than could count on fingers;)

Neha · October 15, 2017 at 11:08 am

Very nicely done!Weight and a model’s life are always at logger heads.

Payal Agarwal · October 15, 2017 at 12:19 pm

Loved the twist in this poem. Well written.

Mayuri Nidigallu · October 18, 2017 at 2:46 am

Hahahaha! Such a fun twist! Loved reading this, Dipika!:)
That is me you’re talking about there!

ravi · October 18, 2017 at 5:32 pm

That was creative….Good one

AuraOfThoughts MeenalSonal · October 22, 2017 at 2:46 am

Haha! Yes we all have bated breath climbing the weight machine. Nice take on a prompt!

Cheers
MeenalSonal from AuraOfThoughts

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