For the war and pieces “An EYE for an EYE and the Whole WORLD goes BLIND” – Mahatma Gandhi

war pieces

This is my entry for the fourth day of #Barathon 2017, the fortnight-long blogging marathon for bloggers, organised by Blog-A-Rhythm! Today’s prompt is ‘War and Pieces’, featured in my fictional story.

At 65 she has the strength and agility of a teenager when I asked her about what she ate in her breakfast, she sheepishly replied – Milk and Paratha (with ghee)! I laughed and said, is umar mein zyada ghee na khaya karo (don’t have so much clarified butter at this age) she just smiled wide showing her beetle leaf stained teeth.

Zahira Bano we call her ‘Bi’, has lived all her life here in the vicinity working as a household help or picking up door to door tailoring jobs. She hasn’t changed even a bit with time, as far as I remember she still wears the same kind of clothes, lives in the same room, does the same work though the addition of spectacles cannot be missed out. I asked her if she remembers me? her reply was as antique as she is – I have held you when you came out from your mother’s womb – how can I forget you??

I always had this connection with Zahira Bi (probably due to her stories of pre-historic era for me) when mother used to give her evening tea and biscuits, I would close my books and sit next to her asking all about the partition stories, war stories, stories of mythology and much more. She would tell this all animatedly, to make me believe in each and every word of hers. But today her silence has overpowered the stories, her wrinkles look grisly and she looks very fragile. My heart pained seeing her like this, I asked mother what is wrong with her – “her son” all she replied back.

Later I coaxed more out of mother about Bi, she told me how Bi struggled all her life working tirelessly for hours together to save on money for her Son. She sent him to English medium school for better education, brought him good clothes when she herself wore tatters, kept him well fed while she slept only on leftover grains of rice, kept of stitching clothes whole night during festivals to get extra money for his Eid… and when he became of age to take care of Bi, to keep her hail and hearty – he threw her out of the house claiming she has lost her mental balance.

I lost my sanity here and cursed this man from the deepest bottom of my heart, how can he be such a fool. Who doesn’t love Bi.. she’s such a sweet lady. She was hardly 25 when her husband died and left this ‘stupid emotionless creature’ with her. Young, beautiful, charming lady, so many wished to marry her but she fought the entire ‘community’ to stay single for this fool of a son. Why no one interfered and helped her I asked mother? Why didn’t you help her?? Mother, smiled and said – ‘I know you will do something good for that poor soul‘.

I called some friends and got connected to an ‘Shelter Home for Elderly‘, they heard about Bi and asked me to get her to the centre. When I told her about the shelter home, she looked disoriented her eyes were filled with the clouds of uncertainty, but after meeting the consultant from centre she got little comfortable and narrated her entire life story. Such are the people we should made ‘biopics’ who fought WAR their entire life – fought with destiny, fought with society, fought with inner doubts and in the end all they are left with are some broken PIECES of life and hope.

Disclaimer- this entire story is a piece of fiction written only for #Bar-A-Thon.

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Sangbad · June 24, 2017 at 4:35 am

It made me remind of a story from Interpreter of Maladies…beautifully written…one think “rice water” doesn’t sound correct…you can use phan (pronounce fan) or rice palp…hope you will not mind…

    gleefulblogger · June 24, 2017 at 4:36 am

    Sure sure.. thanks a lot for correcting me there. Glad you liked it 🙂

Sangbad · June 24, 2017 at 4:39 am

Apology it will be rice pap…

    gleefulblogger · June 24, 2017 at 5:11 am

    Thanks a lot for correcting me…
    Glad you liked it 🙂

Anamika Agnihotri · June 24, 2017 at 5:35 am

Such stories of hardships are everywhere requiring them to be publicized. These are also pointers for us as parents that how much we do for our children but we mustn’t lose sight of ourselves as individuals too.

    gleefulblogger · June 24, 2017 at 5:36 am

    Yes true Anamika… Thank You for reading and connecting

Ishieta@Isheeria · June 24, 2017 at 8:20 am

Beautiful story… Resonated for me.. About the war we fight in a regular day, and pieces which we are left with.

Marquessa · June 24, 2017 at 9:42 am

Beautifully written. What a horrible son! Your story reminds of those spoken by my folks of happenings in theor home country!

    gleefulblogger · June 24, 2017 at 9:49 am

    Thank You for reading 🙂

Vasantha Vivek · June 24, 2017 at 11:02 am

It’s painful on reading this. Such a profound writing which made this as a real story. Parents are our gifts. We should cherish them forever.

    gleefulblogger · June 24, 2017 at 11:05 am

    Thank You so much Vasantha 💞💞

Bellybytes · June 24, 2017 at 2:06 pm

Sadly, there are many people who really wage such wars…..The case of the ungrateful child is a very old and real one in many people’s lives

Shamik · June 24, 2017 at 2:43 pm

Very nice and touching story indeed… Nicely written!!

Shilpa Garg · June 24, 2017 at 4:27 pm

A poignant story which is a sad reality for so many parents. In fact have seen this abandonment of parents by kids in old age despite they doing everything possible for them. Liked your interpretation of the prompt.

Kavita Singh · June 25, 2017 at 9:28 am

This story melts my heart, how beautifully you have penned it with such thought provoking topic. I am loving this fiction writer in you. Kudos!

    gleefulblogger · June 26, 2017 at 1:46 am

    Thank You very much

Obsessivemom · June 27, 2017 at 9:55 am

This is only too true for so many people. I see my maid struggling to educate her son, just like Bi of your story, while he refuses to appreciate her efforts completely flunking in each class, ‘forgetting’ his date of exam and not turning up at home for days.

    gleefulblogger · June 27, 2017 at 10:09 am

    true that Tulika, Thank You for stopping by to read 🙂

Akshata · June 27, 2017 at 10:02 am

Sadly the true story in many households. Liked how you used the prompt to bring out this harsh reality

    gleefulblogger · June 27, 2017 at 10:07 am

    Thanks Akshata for reading.

Varadharajan · June 27, 2017 at 5:40 pm

Beautifully written. Your narration is very vivid. Zahira Bi might be a figment of your imagination, but there are countless such Zahiras and Zahirs left on the road by their children. Some time back, I wrote a story along the same lines as well. Cheers, Varad

    gleefulblogger · June 27, 2017 at 5:43 pm

    Thanks heaps Varad for reading and your feedback.
    True that indeed.

Manisha Garg · June 30, 2017 at 5:35 am

I am sure such stories are there everywhere. For parents, it’s only and only their kids. They stop thinking and caring about themselves and their entire focus is on their kids, when in the later years of your life you think things would be better, they shatter away.

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