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Suman was looking at her daughter when she realized her left hand stopped throbbing, she kept on moving her fingers to re-assure if its for true – her pain is gone at last.

Beaming pan stained teeth, she brushed her fingers to Komal’s cheeks and gave her a motherly kiss. Komal immediately braced her in tight hug – “Maa, teri beti aaj doctor ban gayi!”*

Suman could not control her tears, happily called all her sisters – “Dekho meri bitiya daactor ban gayi”**

She took stethoscope & degree from Komal’s hands and kept in her diety’s feet, “I was waiting for this day since ages, today you proved them wrong – you are not like me & will never be

Mother, you once told me if we really want something in life; whole universe conspires to make it happen! Your determination made me accomplish our dream, I will always be daughter of Suman didi of Kamathipura.

* (Mom, your daughter has become a Doctor today)

** (See, my daughter is a Doctor now)

Kamathipura is Mumbai’s oldest & Asia’s second largest red-light district.

Word count – 150

© Dipika Singh

Tina Basu

Linking this post with #FridayFotoFiction by Tina or Mayuri

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56 Comments

Anita Singh · August 29, 2017 at 6:31 pm

Bahut touching n motivational hai 👌👌

    gleefulblogger · August 30, 2017 at 3:08 am

    Thank You Anitaji

Mayuri Nidigallu · August 30, 2017 at 2:20 am

Wow!
What a motivating story this is, Dipika!
Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

    gleefulblogger · August 30, 2017 at 3:09 am

    Thank You Mayuri, glad you liked it. 💗

Team MocktailMommies · August 30, 2017 at 5:41 am

Lotuses bloom in mud… so true! A great story of “Sheroes”!
-Anagha from TeamMocktailMommies
https://mocktailmommies.blogspot.com

    gleefulblogger · August 30, 2017 at 5:46 am

    Thank You Anagha…
    Tell me more about Sheroes – we can take it on twitter DM if okay.

    Heading to read yours.

Sangeeta · August 30, 2017 at 5:56 am

Short but a really touching story. Very beautifully written.

    gleefulblogger · August 30, 2017 at 6:18 am

    Thank You Sangeeta, glad you liked it.

Jiya B · August 30, 2017 at 6:19 am

such a motivational and lovely post. It inspires and itr true taht a mother is the most happiest person on the planet when her dreams comes true thru her daughters

Amrita Basu (Misra) · August 30, 2017 at 7:08 am

Such a beautiful story Dipika. Unfortunately few will want to be doctors if the current violence and criminal charges on doctors continue.

    gleefulblogger · August 30, 2017 at 9:02 am

    Thank You so much Amrita, it’s beautiful stream of choice. Respect to those who are true to their art of saving lives.
    Sad on the part of administration that such assaults take place.

Deepa · August 30, 2017 at 7:51 am

A Beautiful tale of a mom and a daughter. I really hope more moms in small towns encourage their daughters like this.

    gleefulblogger · August 30, 2017 at 8:57 am

    Thank You Deepa.

Minakshi Bajpai · August 30, 2017 at 9:03 am

How beautifully you drafted love between mom and daughter. Motherly kiss made me emotional that i want to grab her and kiss. Moms are truly one sweet flower of love.

Sabeeka Lambe · August 30, 2017 at 1:57 pm

So motivational as well as captivating… Such few words and so much emotion… Loved itb

L steffy Manju · August 30, 2017 at 4:48 pm

Inspiring story….success doesn’t come to u fr u hail frm a classy background…..it is a trophy 🏆 for those who work hard…..

    gleefulblogger · August 30, 2017 at 5:25 pm

    Thank you so much. Yes I truly believe in that.

Hena Jose · August 30, 2017 at 5:15 pm

A story of grit and determination. Good one. Hope your story becomes a reality for girls from that place.

    gleefulblogger · August 30, 2017 at 5:26 pm

    Thank You so much Hena.
    Amen

Papri Ganguly · August 31, 2017 at 3:26 am

Wow! I’m so spellbound. Such a lovely story.

    gleefulblogger · August 31, 2017 at 5:33 am

    Thank You Papri

Mrinal · August 31, 2017 at 3:39 am

Such a touching story! Really we treat sex workers very inhumanly.. they deserve everything in life too

    gleefulblogger · August 31, 2017 at 5:32 am

    Thank You so much dear. Glad you connected to the thought.

Namrata · August 31, 2017 at 6:52 am

This story is absolutely heart-touching! <3

    gleefulblogger · August 31, 2017 at 4:38 pm

    Thank You Namrata

Bushra · August 31, 2017 at 8:00 am

Very beautifully penned new perspective to see beyond for red light areas life

Joshita JJ · August 31, 2017 at 9:10 am

This made me speechless. I hope that all daughters of Kamathipura achieve success and make their mothers proud…

Ar. Shivali Singla · August 31, 2017 at 10:00 am

Really an interesting and inspirational story dear. Love this. Keep on sharing such posts.

    gleefulblogger · August 31, 2017 at 4:37 pm

    Thank You so much Glad you liked it

Deepika Verma · August 31, 2017 at 11:34 am

That’s is beautiful… I love such inspirational reads.. moms are the best teachers no doubt

Tina · August 31, 2017 at 11:47 am

very touching Dipika, more power to all the girls. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction

Soniya Bhatt · September 1, 2017 at 2:44 am

It is such a beautiful piece of write up 🙂 loved it

    gleefulblogger · September 2, 2017 at 3:27 am

    Thank You, glad you liked it. Next will be up soon

Anamika · September 1, 2017 at 10:06 am

In a few words, you penned a beautiful story.

    gleefulblogger · September 1, 2017 at 12:48 pm

    Thank You Anamika, glad you liked it.

Bulbul Varma · September 3, 2017 at 7:54 am

A really great way of expression. It’s inspiring and well written!!

Anubhuti Seth · September 3, 2017 at 6:29 pm

Expressive, touchy, motivational and emotional. Loved it..

Bellybytes · September 4, 2017 at 6:21 am

This is a lovely story of grit and determination but I couldn’t see the connection with the photo prompt.

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 6:26 am

    Thank you for stopping by & reading, for me the prompt featured as an old lady who could not relent her desire to get educated & live a better life from what she is today. But with her daughter’s upbringing she could teach her to see beyond the surroundings and grow. That’s why the mother is life’s best teacher. Thank You

upasna · September 4, 2017 at 6:33 am

A story that celebrates Motherhood and determination. #MyFriendAlexa #BioscopeReads

Ashwini Dodani · September 4, 2017 at 8:42 am

Beautiful. Passion, Achievements and support keeps us going. Also, a Mother’s Blessings are undefinable. Definitely a short and good read 🙂

Varsh · September 4, 2017 at 8:51 am

Beautiful story, darling. 👌 The universe conspires for the ones who really want something to happen and try for it.

Novemberschild · September 4, 2017 at 12:00 pm

Life is the best teacher, just as it is. It is the toughest teacher. It won’t tolerate slothfulness for long. It’s always throwing some difficult problem your way and then seeing what you will do with it. Life awakens the joy in creative expression and knowledge. The ultimate lesson all of us have to learn is unconditional love, which includes not only others but ourselves as well. No matter what happens, life goes on and we have to go along with it to survive, No matter how many times you fail, you have to pick yourself up and Move on.

Shalu Sharma Rathod · September 4, 2017 at 12:34 pm

It is sad that people get labelled for the background from which they come from. Stories like these – fiction as well as the million of real ones are so inspiring for everyone.

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 4:53 pm

    Thank You so much

Dr Roshan Radhakrishnan · September 4, 2017 at 1:56 pm

An amazing theme… loved this story.

Aseem Rastogi · September 4, 2017 at 3:28 pm

Quite an inspirational story. Just goes to show that if one has the will power to achieve something, then nothing is impossible.

Ramya drozario · September 4, 2017 at 4:36 pm

Lovely post. This makes me want to try something similar… A flash fiction post of sorts. Good luck with this month. 🙂

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 4:38 pm

    Thank You so much for reading, yes please do and when you start call upon me too for participation.

arv · September 4, 2017 at 5:51 pm

Your post reminded me of a book “the secret” which also has the same concept- if you really want it, the world will conspire to make it happen. lovely write up!

priyanka vermani · September 4, 2017 at 7:35 pm

very nice post btw how do you get to know of this contest? would like to participate

NEHA JAIN · September 5, 2017 at 4:40 am

Lovely post Dipika.. I too believed in the concept of “if you truly want something, the whole universe conspires in helping you to achieve it”.

Manisha Garg · September 5, 2017 at 6:14 am

Could imagine while reading, great one

    gleefulblogger · September 5, 2017 at 9:33 am

    Thank you so much Manisha

Saumy Nagayach · September 5, 2017 at 6:17 am

I’m unable to find out words here because this story is nothing short of exemplary. I’m glad, I read this piece. You’re amazing with words and story composition, Dipika. Loved your way of storytelling. 🙂

    gleefulblogger · September 5, 2017 at 9:32 am

    Thank you so much Saumy, I am so glad you liked my writing.

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