Sushma was wheeled into the trauma pit, the confusion and chaos were palpable across the hall. Visitors, nurses, doctors everyone hurriedly looking at the bride who is just rushed to the ER on her wedding day in the wedding dress with rugged breathing and unconscious.
Pastel lavender is her color, she is looking incredibly beautiful in the wedding gown, which is now falling down from the stretcher as she lies unconscious. Doctors pushed everyone aside and took her inside the examination room.
Mark is pacing nearby, he is as clueless as everyone else, but somehow he is supposed to be the one answering their prying eyes. Before he could gather himself to say anything, an on-call doctor cut him in to ask about the patient’s medical history.
‘She was fit as a fiddle, no diseases or illnesses as far as I know her’, stammered Mark.
‘And how long is that be… Sir’? quizzed the doctor.
Four years two months and twenty-eight days, his brain spluttered out, ‘around four years, and she never called in sick, not even once’ he replied.
‘Alright, any history of diabetes, cancer, or heart disease in the family’? the doctor rechecked.
The question created a small zizz among the waiting relatives, doctor gestured for them to leave the area. ‘Only kin of patient allowed, everyone else please leave. You can visit during visiting hours.’
‘I don’t know that, okay! She has no one else, but me. What is wrong with her, she was absolutely healthy and happy, then out of a sudden, she collapsed in the middle of our wedding, breathless and sweaty. Is that a heart attack, please tell me what is wrong with Sushma?’ Mark was desperate to get some answers.
The doctor handed him a glass of water and said, ‘she is not responding to the anti-anxiety kit or CPR her vitals are under control but we can’t find any nerve activity, as yet. Her MRI, ECG, and CT report are awaited, we will be able to update you once we have our answers. Hang in there!’
Mark felt as if he is shot in the chest, they waited for this day for seven months. They had planned each and every aspect of the wedding day to the specifics. From flowers, food, decoration, invitations, and dresses, to jewelry, her signature style perfection was all over the place, keeping tabs on everything impeccably. She hired the best baker for their wedding cake, the best wine, celebrity make-up, and the hairstylist. Everything was in place until she collapsed.
Sushma and Mark had known each other for over four years, he was her Boss and an interesting person to meet for drinks after office hours. Being a hardcore professional, Sushma had a ‘No-Dating the Boss Rule’, but Mark wasn’t just a fling. So, she shifted her job and moved into a real relationship with him. For the first time in her life, she felt genuinely loved by someone, not because of her looks, model-like body, or career choices, but pure love.
They had a very smooth-sailing in-partner relationship, a high graph of careers, good money in the bank, luxuries, holidays together, lots of sex, and no responsibilities until Mark went down on the knee. He knew she was waiting for this day, her eyes gleamed with joy when Mark asked her hand for marriage. Finally, she will have a family, her own little space of personal happiness, something she missed her entire life being brought up in a foster home.
‘Sir, are you with us’, quizzed the doctors bringing Mark back from his thought trail.
He whirled back to the present day in the hospital, awaiting Sushma’s medical update. A team of three doctors in white coats ready to tell their diagnosis, ‘Your fiance’s reports are with us, we have analyzed them along with the patient’s responses. She happens to be suffering from an aggressive stage of Cardiac Sarcoma. It’s rare but not uncommon, right now we are trying to identify the root of the tumor but as it is located deep inside her heart, it may take a few days and numerous procedures to identify it.’
After a few awkward moments of numbness, another doctor said, ‘we think at this point in time, you should call back at the wedding hall and tell everyone to leave. We are in this with you, Sir, but as doctors, we can’t give you any false hopes. You should prepare yourself for the worst.’
His world came crashing down to his shoulders and suddenly he felt too heavy to stand all by himself, strutting backward he fell on the chair. Speechless, thoughtless, and emotionless he sat in that chair motionless while the entire world swirled around his eyes. He didn’t realize how the whole day whizzed by, the nurse came to call him, Sushma is conscious and this is his best chance to meet her before doctors sedate her for biopsy procedures.
Each step felt like a million tonnes of weight, he cannot do this, not now, not ever. Somehow, he was standing in front of door 4228 (irony huh) when the nurse opened the door, everything felt like a haze until his eyes found what he seeks the most – Her! she smiled back at Mark, her eyes were shining gold thanks to the sunlight seeping in from the windows. Angelic, she looked like an angel.
Mark sat next to the bed, he held her hand and gently said – ‘everything is gonna be alright, we will be back home soon. Doctors will conduct a few more tests, and then we will be free to go home.’
She said nothing, just smiled as if she knows! Her smile was kind of reassuring, the warmth it was emanating melted his heart but also broke it into million pieces. She whispered slowly, ‘We wrote our woes to be together forever in the highs and lows, health and sickness, in good or bad, Mark.’
‘It just doesn’t matter if the “forever” is four damn years or a whole lifetime. What matters is, we had the best time of our lives together. True, we had very little time for love, but that’s the only time I want to remember for whatever time I am left with. This will be our ‘happy ending’, Mark.
This story is written for season 3 of #storytellersbloghop, hosted by Ujjwal and MeenalSonal
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44 Comments
A heart wrenching tale of love. I hope Sushma recovers and she and Mark get to live out their love story. This was a very emotional read, Dipika.
True, how harsh life could be sometimes. Your story reflects the harsh truths of life, but there is also another truth and that is love. A very strong shade of love you have shared here. Forever, could have many definitions.
What a story Dipika! It just got me heartbroken and full of hope at the same time. Sometimes, life throws challenges at us that seem to break us. But with the loved ones, their memories, we cling to one shade of love – that is ‘HOPE’. This is indeed a powerful story that reminds us to love unconditionally and never take our loved ones for granted.
The worst ever fear and the one thing that nobody would want is losing their loved ones. This is so beautifully explained and makes one realise on how every moment in a relationship should be cherished and lived at its best… KAL HO NA HO ❤️
Life is unpredictable. Finding true love in whatever time we have here is awesome.
Beautiful story of many challenges one faces in life and love is what keeps us afloat. Truly love, even if its for a small time is all we need to spend a lifetime with. I hope their story has a happy ending afterall
The story made me weep…a love so perfect, but so short. But I guess,all good things come to show us something beautiful.
A beautiful tale of having found love and on the brink of losing it all over again. True love definitely needs no time to culminate or end, some love stories live on forever like Mark’s and Sushma’s.
That’s so true, glad you like it. Thank You.
A heart-wrenching tale of love. They were so close to being together. reading this left me misty-eyed, Dipika. Beautiful story.
Thank you, Mauyri.
I strongly believe in challenges and I liked the way you showed shades of love in your story.
Not just true love but life itself is a big challenge and definitely how one faces and wins matters a lot – something in losing there is a win.
I strongly agree to this, thank you for stopping by.
Such a sad, yet beautiful love story! You deftly brought out Mark’s emotions and Sushma’s strength.
P.s. I suggest you edit the story once again as there are lots of tense jumps. It will elevate your story to be outstanding
Thank you for stopping by, I did my best in editing but will recheck.
Such a beautiful love story! And your use of language is excellent too! Keep writing! 🙂
Thank you so much, glad you like it.
Nicely written….
The story was gripping…
Thank you for stopping by.
You had me at the edge of my chair and I had to take a deep breath halfway through. This a well-paced and remarkable description of what a shade of everlasting love looks like – moment by moment.
I am so glad to read your feedback, happy to know you liked the story.
Your story made me emotional. Each and every emotion in the story conveys a clear message that love is everything and is above all, A tale of pure love narrated beautifully!
Gosh, it was very emotional. But I think when couples go through such things, their love grows stronger. Hope she gets well soon and they live happily ever after.
I agree, love strengthens with time. Thank you for stopping by.
The story has two statements. It breaks the norm of marriage and also it speaks about true love which stays strong through thick and thin. I loved how you have slowly given a build up and portrayed the love when it is in chaos
Life can be tough but holding onto precious moments makes it worthwhile. True love stories never end. I was engaged till the end of the story.
A very poignant and touching story. But life does have this habit of delivering thunderbolts from out of the blue, and your life turns topsy-turvy, just like in this story penned by you.
This tells life is so uncertain. Acying can happen anytime. Very touching story Dipika. I was like scrolling it down to see what happened to her.. Your story made me anxious.. Loved it
A very emotional read! You have shown that true love does not depend on time but is rather related to the intention of being with each other even when things do not go as planned. I wish they both had more time together. Loved it.
Ii eagerly wait to know if she made it. But looking at the instances shared looks like they had a great time I hope that they continue to remain in happiness once she recovers
That was really touching. I must say.
A sad love story but such a strong shade of love <3 Forever can be different for everyone. Loved the thought behind this one 🙂
Thank you for your feedback.
From wedding to happy ending a fully-fledged story of love written well every way. The descriptions about the wedding to the last scene is neatly scripted.
Thank you glad you like it.
Two very strong messages this story conveys –
1. Life is unpredictable, and we never know when something unexpected can happen.
2. Love can give us the strength to face difficult situations, and it is important to cherish our loved ones while we can.
So intense, so deep and so well curated. Loved the story D 😍
I am glad you like it, thank you
Believe it or not, I have tried hard to control my tears from flowing. That’s the power of your writing, Lady.
All of us are so bound by the concept of finding ‘forever’ that we tend to miss out on what’s happening around us in the moment. My takeway from the story is to focus more on the now and worry later about a tomorrow I know nothing about. Things happen when we least expect them – good or bad.
You are right! Forever is what we always seek, but every moment is worth living to the fullest. Thank you.
You have such an amazing sense of writing, and beautiful in built creative thinking hat. How everything beautiful shattered in no time and yet the girl was happy and smiling, wanting to be happy and with her love, her partner for life. A beautiful emotion captured in this story.
I am so glad to read this, thank you for such kind words.
Loved this!! Very gripping, and always keeps you on the edge, leaving you wondering what will happen next.