#FridayFotoFiction Challenge is hosted by two amazing bloggers TinaΒ &Β MayuriΒ where they give out photo prompts and bloggers have to write a 100-150 word tiny fiction around it. It can be anything. Every week they pick up a Featured Blogger from all the participants of the week and at the end of the month a monthly winner who gets Cash prize!
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Here is my entry for this week’s #FridayFotoFIction

Burning Itch – The Piano

I was 6 when started accompanying mother to work; she was weak of tuberculosis, I helped her with daily chores.

The Madam was a Piano teacher, where we worked. She had a beautiful house Mother said she was very famous & many kids used to come for piano lessons there.

I loved the sound of Piano! I listened very carefully when she taught chords & notes. Once I even tried creating music reading her notes but she got so annoyed and closed the lid on my hands!

It pains every time I remember that day, but honestly, today if I am here it is all because of her. The more she snubbed my longing towards learning Piano, more I got determined to learn and excel in it. I dedicate my success to her.

We musicians should think beyond the social boundaries and do what we know best – Spread Love.

Β© Dipika Singh
Word count – 150.

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90 Comments

Mayuri · September 3, 2017 at 2:11 pm

Such a positive and hopeful tale, Dipika.
A reminder to never give up.
Beautiful!
Thank you for writing for #FridayFotoFiction

    gleefulblogger · September 3, 2017 at 2:12 pm

    Thank You Mayuri, glad you liked

zainab · September 3, 2017 at 6:39 pm

Loved this tstory, had an ouch moment though πŸ˜›

Anita Singh · September 3, 2017 at 7:21 pm

Bahut accha motivational likha hai, hume kisi bhi baat se positive hi bahar nikalna hoga tabhi success karengey
Aapki story se yehi kitne acche se samney aaya πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Deepali Adhikary · September 3, 2017 at 10:02 pm

Never back down! well written.

    gleefulblogger · September 3, 2017 at 4:34 pm

    Hey thank for stopping by. Glad you like the story.

Cheryl Sterling · September 3, 2017 at 10:30 pm

I played piano when I was five or six. Unfortunately, all I remember is a dark house and the metronome. I must not have musical talent. Cheers for you for taking a bad situation and turning it to the good!

Obsessivemom · September 4, 2017 at 12:12 am

Persistence is the way to success – nicely written. It is so easy to back off when one is snubbed. But only the ones who do not give up make something big out of their lives.

Rajlakshmi · September 4, 2017 at 1:38 am

Beautiful story. Indeed musicians should spread love instead of snubbing the students.

Ruchi Verma · September 4, 2017 at 2:00 am

I look this girl as an inspiration and we all should learn from negativity of others and make it positive

Akshata · September 4, 2017 at 5:24 am

That is truly a story of grit and determination and succeeding despite all odds. Loved how you used the prompt Dips

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 6:16 am

    Thank You Aks coming this from you is amazing feel. Gratitude

Avinash · September 4, 2017 at 5:44 am

What a positive read- really made my Monday

Monika · September 4, 2017 at 6:07 am

Lovely, creating positive out of negative .

Tina · September 4, 2017 at 6:24 am

Wow what a positive end to that story. When you snub someone you push him to excell, that happens in reality. Thanks for linking up with #FridayFotoFiction

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 6:30 am

    Thank You so much Tina, loving the #FridayFotoFiction thank for having me with you in this.

Ishieta @ Isheeria's · September 4, 2017 at 6:30 am

Love the point of this! indeed, many times, many people have snubbed us..but we stand up everytime and keep going! in 150 words you have said something so important!

Prisha Lalwani · September 4, 2017 at 6:46 am

Thats a crazily beautiful story!! WOW!!!!

U K · September 4, 2017 at 6:49 am

Wow…Very well written…Monday positivity.. πŸ™‚

Mahak @babyandbeyondin · September 4, 2017 at 6:56 am

You know, when I read that the teacher slammed the lid shut on the author’s fingers, I thought this would be a tale of regret and lost dreams because of a tough teacher. I was pleasantly surprised to see the positive spin on it. Love it

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 7:07 am

    Thank You so much, glad you liked it.

Roma · September 4, 2017 at 7:42 am

Good one Dipika. Beautifully conceived n woven.

Sadhuvi · September 4, 2017 at 7:42 am

Such experiences in life makes us strong and helps us to achieve what we wish!!

ashwin · September 4, 2017 at 8:06 am

I too love the sound of piano.

Anchal · September 4, 2017 at 8:38 am

Such a thoughtful post. Loved reading it.

Shamik · September 4, 2017 at 8:46 am

Nice read. A positive thought on Monday!! Thank you for sharing!!

Varsh · September 4, 2017 at 8:46 am

Such a sweet and motivational story, Dipika. Melody doesn’t necessarily come to someone who has trained with the best. It is a quality that develops with pain and hard work.

Samarpita Mukherjee Sharma · September 4, 2017 at 8:56 am

Such a positive story. True, it is our detractors to whom we owe a large part of our successes – we might not have tried to win had we not been stopped from trying certain things!

Deepa · September 4, 2017 at 9:01 am

Beautiful story. I loved how you weaved a positivity in the tale. Love happy endings. πŸ™‚

Vasantha Vivek · September 4, 2017 at 9:12 am

Motivating story. The determination and confidence were quite amazing. I could feel the pain in your story.

Neha · September 4, 2017 at 9:12 am

Spread love indeed! Music and art cannot be bound by societal boundaries

Vinay Leo R. · September 4, 2017 at 9:21 am

It’s good that that act of despise spurred her toward determination πŸ™‚ Music must bring people together, not tear each other apart.

Ruby Singh · September 4, 2017 at 9:56 am

Do you play Piano ?

Iram · September 4, 2017 at 10:10 am

What an apt story to the photo. Added to it how you took inspiration is truly inspiring.
Good luck for your future endeavors πŸ‘

Dr Pooja Tripathi · September 4, 2017 at 10:14 am

Beautiful morning read
P.

Amrita Basu · September 4, 2017 at 10:26 am

Creative people need to help spread more hope.Lovely take on the prompt.Loved reading this.I wonder why the teacher behaved this way?

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 4:54 pm

    Thanks Amrita πŸ™‚

Prasanna · September 4, 2017 at 10:52 am

Such an innocent, lovely tale. The message conveyed is so true…we should all spread love!!!

Aesha Shah · September 4, 2017 at 10:55 am

different take on the prompt. I liked the determination potrayed in the story. everything is possible with sheer determination.

karuna chauhan · September 4, 2017 at 11:05 am

success comes to those who never give up! Loved your short and meaningful tale about determination and grit!

Nupur · September 4, 2017 at 11:47 am

Ouch. Powerful image.

anupriya · September 4, 2017 at 12:53 pm

Nice and heart warming story. Learning knows no bounds and your story speaks volumes about learning. Happy blogging with Alexa.

Shraesta · September 4, 2017 at 1:48 pm

The way you have flipped the pain into happiness of success and determination shows your heart.

Hena Jose · September 4, 2017 at 2:25 pm

A positive story on determination and forgiveness…I must say. Though its a short piece, your story gives out a strong message.

Team MocktailMommies · September 4, 2017 at 2:32 pm

The portrayal is so real that I felt the pain in my fingers!! Loved the indomitable spirit of the tale!
-Anagha from Team MocktailMommies
https://mocktailmommies.blogspot.com

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 4:52 pm

    Thank you dear, I am so glad you liked it.

Atulmaharaj · September 4, 2017 at 2:48 pm

Everyone needs to have the Never say Never attitude. Your poem touched our heart. Beautifully put.

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 4:51 pm

    Thank You Atul, glad you like it.

Geethica Mehra · September 4, 2017 at 2:53 pm

Hey Dipika, you have nailed it again. A pro in whatever you take up. such simple words yet a strong message. There is always an elder behind our strive to hard work.

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 4:51 pm

    Thanks dear, glad you like it

Natasha · September 4, 2017 at 3:31 pm

You have an art for story telling Dipsy. And you do it so well. More power to you! Hugs

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 3:48 pm

    Wuhu Natz…. I was waiting for your comment so eagerly. Thank You soooooo much to motivate me write stories. 😍😍

Aseem Rastogi · September 4, 2017 at 3:36 pm

She had the determination to succeed and she eventually did. A lovely story :).

Sabeeka Lambe · September 4, 2017 at 3:38 pm

Such a motivational one this is… when you really want something, there is nothing that can get in the way

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 4:39 pm

    Yes, that’s the spirit of life isn’t it. Thanks dear for reading and stopping by

Diya · September 4, 2017 at 3:54 pm

Hey!
Love how you entwined the positivity in this tale.

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 4:38 pm

    Thank You Diya for reading

Dixita · September 4, 2017 at 3:56 pm

A perfect teachers day post.
Loved reading it

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 4:37 pm

    Oh yeah tomorrow is Teacher’s Day, thanks Dixita for reminding dear. and thanks for reading too

Ramya Rao · September 4, 2017 at 4:29 pm

Such a beautiful and positive story Deepika. Brilliantly written.

The heart always gets more determined when denied or is tried to stop.

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 4:36 pm

    Thank You so much Ramya and reading and commenting.

Modern Gypsy · September 4, 2017 at 4:43 pm

True that. Music should have no social barriers. Great story!

    gleefulblogger · September 4, 2017 at 4:50 pm

    Thank You so much for reading πŸ™‚

Reema Dsouza · September 4, 2017 at 4:56 pm

Such a lovely tale! Sometimes when someone puts us down, we get more determined to achieve something great in that very field.

Gayatri · September 4, 2017 at 5:18 pm

Talent is not subservient to the mighty. A short and crisp tale of how perseverance and persistence pays.Nice.

Swathi Shenoy · September 4, 2017 at 5:49 pm

Sometimes it is this resistance that makes us more determined. Loved this write up πŸ™‚

charu Sareen · September 4, 2017 at 6:24 pm

Such a beautiful read. Loved the message you have shared.

priyanka vermani · September 4, 2017 at 7:27 pm

lovely story in few words with feelings and emotions thrown in good measure!

Sheethal Susan Jacob · September 4, 2017 at 8:24 pm

I love the positiveness that emerges from pain. Beautiful take.

Neha Gupta · September 5, 2017 at 2:15 am

Wow this is such a beautiful and inspiring story. Loved it πŸ™‚ ..

Saumy Nagayach · September 5, 2017 at 6:09 am

This is such an inspiring short story, Dipika! Some people just restrict themselves to share their knowledge with others and that’s where they fail in life. It’s always wonderful to share your gift with others. Beautifully penned! πŸ™‚

    gleefulblogger · September 5, 2017 at 9:33 am

    Thank You once again

Manisha Garg · September 5, 2017 at 6:12 am

Nothing can stop you from where you truly belong from heart

Namrata · September 5, 2017 at 7:16 am

Wow!! This is so positive and motivating, absolutely a beautiful story. <3

keerthi vydyula · September 5, 2017 at 9:10 am

Amazing that you turned the whole incident into a positive driving force! Loved the write-up πŸ™‚

    gleefulblogger · September 5, 2017 at 9:34 am

    Thank You Keerti

Tina Sequeira · September 5, 2017 at 12:24 pm

Hi Dipika! I loved what you did with this prompt. An enjoyable and inspiring story. Beautiful message and title! I warmly invite you to read my blogposts at https://thetinaedit.com/. Keep writing. Cheers! πŸ™‚

    gleefulblogger · September 6, 2017 at 9:10 am

    Thank You so much Tina, glad you like it. Visiting your blog πŸ™‚

Seema Wadhwa · September 5, 2017 at 5:18 pm

Dipika, that’s a wonderful tale in 150 words, you just told the most meaningful things in the least words πŸ™‚

    gleefulblogger · September 6, 2017 at 9:11 am

    Thank you so much Seema πŸ™‚

Kavita Singh · September 5, 2017 at 6:38 pm

Another fabulous piece of fiction from you. Few lines speak volume wherein many pages couldn’t convey the right message. I loved this short and crisp post of yours.

    gleefulblogger · September 6, 2017 at 9:11 am

    Thank you so much dear. glad you like it

Disha · September 6, 2017 at 9:21 am

Loved the postive vibes potrayed through story! πŸ™‚

Pratibha · September 6, 2017 at 10:34 am

Wonderfully narrated

Meenakshi J · September 7, 2017 at 4:40 am

Music is so therapeutic and this post emits hope…Keep blogging β˜ΊπŸ‘

    gleefulblogger · September 7, 2017 at 6:41 am

    Thank you so much Meenakshi for stopping by connecting.

Venice · September 7, 2017 at 11:41 am

You’ve woven in the message beautifully in this short lovely story πŸ™‚ Music and going against the odds is a perfect blend to motivate us to reach our goals and realise our dreams.

creative life star · September 7, 2017 at 2:29 pm

Beautiful story to read. Great thought.

Richa Singh · September 8, 2017 at 4:15 pm

Poignant. Sometimes memories of pain become driving forces of future…

Mandavi Jaiswal · September 9, 2017 at 8:14 am

That is such a terrible thing to do, slam the lid on a child’s fingers. I hope she knows that you are a successful musician now. Life will teach her the lesson.

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